1 INT. KITCHEN- NIGHT 1

It starts off with a black screen.


Door knocks




(With dramatic music playing in the background.)

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2 INT. KITCHEN- NIGHT 2

A POV shot of a knife dripping with blood and then little boy following the feet of the killer walking around the table until the killer pulls out a chair and sits down. The killer’s feet are right besides the boy. All of this is happening from under the table. Then the killer sticks his head under the table.


The boy shifts to the corner of the table.


(Sound of the boy shivering and breathing heavily and then footsteps of killer as breathing becomes heavier as the killer begins to sit down.)

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3 INT. KITCHEN- NIGHT 3

An over the shoulder shot of the boy coming out from under the table.


Says it sniggering and licking his lips the then body twitches. The killer cleans the knife on his shirt then hands the boy the knife which is only little.


Gets close to the boys ear


The boy is still sobering. Then the killer walks off. The camera switches to a high angle shot facing the entrance of the kitchen with a clear view of a dead body on the floor in a pool of blood.

4 INT. OFFICE- DAY 4

Two cops on a desk sitting around doing nothing.






The chief walks in and throws a folder on Frazer’s desk.




Frazer is flicking through the file.





Frazer looks up at the chief and stops looking at the file.

Chief walks out.

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5 EXT. PARK- DAY 5

An establishing shot of a park on a nice sunny day. Panning left to right. The shot switches to the killer and the boy in the shade under a tree near a footpath.


Looks at the boy waiting for him to answer but the boy isn’t reacting to the killer.


He quickly stops what he is saying as a lady just walks past him.



The boy gets up and walks towards the lady.

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6 INY. KITCHEN- NIGHT 6

In the kitchen with the lady from the park on the table tied down with blood on her shirt and cuts on her face and hands crying. The killer looks towards the boy who is on his right hand side.


Then looks at the lady.


She looks away.


She looks on the killer’s left hand side crying and says.


The killer grabs her by the face making her look at the boy screaming very loud.


The lady crying even more now.


There is a mirror on the table he then looks at the lady.


Holding the mirror up near the lady then a POV shot of the killer looking into the mirror where the boy is standing behind him but he doesn’t show up on the mirror’s reflection then throws it on the table. The killer picks up tape and tapes the lady’s mouth closed then looks at the collection of knives on the table then looks to the small knife then hesitates and picks up the biggest one. There is now a big smile on his face. The lady is now trying to scream even more but the tape is preventing her from screaming.

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7 EXT. PARK- DAY 7


The killer and the boy sitting down in the park in the same place as they were before. A lady walks past then the killer looks at the boy and smiles.

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8 INT. KITCHEN- NIGHT 8

In the kitchen with the newest victim from the park on the table tied down with blood on her shirt and cuts on her face and hands crying. The killer talks to the boy.

The boy goes to pick up a small knife but then hesitates and picks up the biggest knife instead but fails to kill the lady. The killer looks at the boy in frustration and leave the room.

The lady cannot see them but she can hear the voices.


They both walk in the killer sits down as the boy makes his way towards the lady.

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9 INT. KITCHEN- DAY 9


The boy is mopping up the pool of blood. Then the killer walks into the kitchen.

The boy shakes his head.


They sit down eating while the killer is reading the front page of the newspaper with a picture of the lady they killed the night before.


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10 EXT. PARK- DAY 10

The killer and the boy are walking to their usual position but as they are walking the killer notices the two cops. He starts to walk past but then walks towards them.


Detective Frazer is writing this down while the killer is watching him write.


The killer looks at the boy.


The boy waves and he and the killer walk off. The killer is smiling and an over the shoulder shot shows the detectives looking confused.

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They make their way to the park and sit in their usual position.

12 EXT. PARK- DAY 12

A lady walks by talking on her phone.


He pushes the boy forward. The boy then takes the lady’s phone and runs towards the killer and the lady yells and chases him.

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13 INT. OFFICE- NIGHT 13

The detectives are at the office.

Detective Frazer then just realizes something that almost gets him off his chair.




Detective Frazer gets up and is looking over detective Jones’ shoulder.


A picture of the killer pops up on the screen. Detective Frazer looks shocked.

They run out.

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The newest victim is now tied up on the table and like the others has been wounded by the killer. The killer circles her smiling then loos towards the boy.


The boy look more uncomfortable, more unsure than ever as he grabs a knife and steps tentatively towards the girl. A close up of the killer.


Close up of the boy looking uncomfortable.


Close up of the boy looking uncomfortable.


Close up of the boy looking uncomfortable.


Close up of the boy looking uncomfortable.


The boy holds up the knife as he is standing near the victim then stabs himself. An overhead shot zooming out with the killer holding the knife in his hands and the boy not there. Then the screen turns black and then the detectives walk in and it cuts to black again.

• The main character : He must resemble the young boy or just same hair colour...20-30 years old
• The young boy:  9-14 years old and again must resemble the main character even if they have the same hair colour would be perfect
• the 3 victims: Important that they must know how to cry as they are about to be murdered so i think its important that they do cry age from 20-30 year old brunets
• Detective Frazer- No picky on how he looks has to be 35 years and over
• Detective Jones- The same as detective Frazer
• Chief- 50 years +